LIFE IS NO MORE!!!
10/05/16
NO MATTER HOW HARD IT IS
DON’T SHOW YOUR FEELINGS
BECAUSE THESE DAYS
THERE IS NO TRUST,
THERE IS NO HUMANITY,
HUMANS SUCK
LEARN TO FAKE A SMILE
AND HOW TO FORCE A LAUGH
IT’S MUCH EASIER,
TO EXPLAIN WHAT’S WRONG WITH...
YOU!!!
That's a deep poem Adam, and has some dark or sad ideas in it. I'm not sure if it's really the way you feel or if you are writing in a way that explores other people's feelings. Either way it is OK to write expressively and with emotion - that's what allows others to connect with what you write. From the other comments you can see that your writing has caused a reaction in others - which is what good writing does. If you do feel like the poem says feel free to have a chat with me or talk with Mum or Dad or someone else you trust. - Mr Corlett
ReplyDeleteThat's a deep poem Adam, and has some dark or sad ideas in it. I'm not sure if it's really the way you feel or if you are writing in a way that explores other people's feelings. Either way it is OK to write expressively and with emotion - that's what allows others to connect with what you write. From the other comments you can see that your writing has caused a reaction in others - which is what good writing does. If you do feel like the poem says feel free to have a chat with me or talk with Mum or Dad or someone else you trust. - Mr Corlett
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